Sunday, July 6, 2008

Progress on Chapter One


My sister and niece visited for the 4th of July. Though I've lived in the DC area for almost 10 years, this was the first time I went into the city for the concert and fireworks. Great fun! it rained a little but no big thing.



They stayed til about 10 this morning. After they left I made myself work on my proposal. Cleaned up chapter one. I think it's looking a lot better. Though I could probably still tighten it up.




Next time - I will tackle chapter 2, currently a redundant and draggy literature review that needs to metamorphasize into something beautiful. Or, at least readable!

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